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To begin with, today’s mass medias, such as newspaper, magazines and television programmers, spend a lot of money to create a programme which people do not like to watch. For example, the fighting news offer program by directly on the open-air, people feel very tired while they usually watch those. A second point, the mess media report explosive news such as politicians’ news, sport news and others. Therefore, people do not understand why the mass media never care about their real living thing in many social areas, because those are the useful news for them and people really care about those news. Obviously, I suggest that the mass media decrease the number of these programmes, such as the programmes related to politics and entertainment. People should feel happier that the mass media have become the civilian media whether they should do that in a reasonable and suitable improvement for their programmes. Secondly, the mass media should care about the common confidence. Besides, they should decrease the benefit which comes from the ADs and others programmes in which people are not interested. To sum up, I believe that the mass media should aim at common confidence.Perhaps it would be a better choice for them. In fact, they should preserve the public benefit for the society. I think that they will get more confidence from most people. As a result, they need to pay more attention in people’s lives. Scores: Part 1: 6 Part 2: 5.5 Dear student, You have answered both tasks. However, there are too many mistakes in both of them. Some of your sentences are illogical. You should pay more attention to grammar, prepositions, word order, singular and plural, etc. Please see the corrections!! Best Regards, Maja (责任编辑：admin) |